Another Short Lovesick Poem (an Edit will be coming soon, I just wanted to post this for now)

Your into deep
And into debt
A deep sea dream
And into depths

You’re not allowed to breath here
Said the fishes
This is your death
Any last wishes?

hmm..

Very interesting Joy, very interesting. It's not what I expected when you said 'Another Short Lovesick Poem' but it's good.
now let me ask, what's with the 'lovesick' poems lately?

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