Safflower
Stagnant
Life and I
Are never moving
Never progressing
Never knowing
Silence
The Tongue and I
Are never stopping
Never breaking
Never slowing
Sarcasm
Retorts and I
Are always Coming
And always going
Always Flowing
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This is new, I'm not sure I've read anything quite like this. Begining each stanza with a new word that begins with an 'S'. Then each line ends in 'ing' and the first line of each stanza has an object and 'I' in it. Anyway you obviously know that but I'm just pointing out the obvious but I think it's really cool. Oh, and.. it's you. It actually describes your character, who you are.
But I hope you got the point of this comment... I like it!
Our tongues...
oldaspirationsneverdie...7
Yes those times of sarcasm come and we let it out...humorous or
hurtful, it just must be said sometimes with a soulful smirk...
Like this poem as it is interesting and written in a very flowing
and different style...