You have to scream it to get it

Hanson and I were in the stream
and we swam too far out and the more i span it
the more wieght it made
and the current and the rain took me by surprise
and we were too far apart to help each other
and i drowned

wow..

oh.. wow! and wow.. as in that was surprising.. i didn't expect that! I think this is... well not your best, but it was an interesting read.

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