Dumb Clunks

Posted June 6th, 2008 by joyce

Beavers have buckteeth
And look like pretty dumb clunks,
They don't give a damn!
If a beaver wore braces,
Then how could he build his dam?

On June 6th, 2008 David Gibbs says:

Very good Joyce, made me chuckle this one!
Dave

On June 6th, 2008 joyce says:

I really like to do humor. It makes me laugh, too. That's always a good thing. Thanks for reading and commenting.

joyce

On June 6th, 2008 lroconnell says:

Funny Joyce, i keep picturing the beaver with braces....a funny visual...great writing.i love it
Linda

On June 6th, 2008 joyce says:

thank you for your nice comment, Linda. Thanks for reading my poems.

joyce

On June 6th, 2008 andrew1 says:

Yes I agree this is very funny, nice tanka Joyce.
Andrew

On June 6th, 2008 joyce says:

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

joyce

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