I Dream of Water

I dream of water.
The small pond I'm wading in
Is now the ocean.
Are things overwhelming me,
Or do I just have to pee?

© 2008 Joyce Greene (All rights reserved)

I dream of water

Cute

thanks, Free

It's a lot of fun writing these things!!
joyce

Ha Ha!

Very good Joyce, enjoyed this one,
Dave

Thanks, Dave

This happens often with me, not always so funny when it happens!! lol Thanks for your nice comment.

joyce

Glad You're Not In My Pool

Joyce,

I love the fact that your sense of humor is just about as warped as mine so that I can dial right into these pieces and giggle to myself uncontrollably.

Ah the relief, let it go!!!!

Your buddy,

Pete

thanks, Pete

Glad to see you made it back. Hope all if OK.
I appreciate your nice comment, yes I guess I do have a warped sense of humor. But I guess it's better than no humor at all!

joyce

Great Visit

Joyce,

It was a great visit. My son looked the best I've seen him in a while and my grandsons wore my old bones out.

Thanks for caring,

Pete

I'm so glad, hope you got some rest...

and that your son is looking better. I envy you your grandchildren.

I just posted a new poem, if you want to look at it. It's slightly different... Thanks!

joyce

Both!

Right on, Joyce. A funny expression of the mind/body connection. -- MS

Thanks, MS

Yes, when you've got to go, I guess your mind has to figure out some way, no matter how extreme, to let you know!! Thanks for taking the time to read and comment.

joyce

he he,good one,couldn't help

he he,good one,couldn't help chuckling

thanks, mimi

As you get older, you dream of water more and more often. lol Thanks for the nice comment.

joyce

Wonderful! Life does

Wonderful! Life does sometimes boil itself down to the urgent and the necessary, doesn't it?

Wow, you've hit the nail on the head!

Thanks for your very wise comment.

joyce

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