My Son in Springtime

Posted May 2nd, 2008 by joyce

Written by Joyce Greene
5/1/08

Yellow buttercup,
A goblet of captured sun,
Held beneath his chin.
Do you like butter, darling?
His laugh releases the sun.

On May 3rd, 2008 lroconnell says:

i LOVE this.

and i love buttercups. this was said so sweetly!
Linda

On May 3rd, 2008 willow says:

I loved this one Joyce fresh innocence, a precious memory of your son and buttercup days , a great write from Willow

On May 3rd, 2008 David Gibbs says:

What a lovely write, love the second and last lines. Really good piece!
Dave

On May 3rd, 2008 Scareysquirel says:

This brought back happy memories for me. As a child I used to do this often.

Very well written Joyce. You captured the feeling of the piece beautifully!

DEbs

On May 4th, 2008 joyce says:

I loved writing this one! They are young for such a short time, without memories it would be gone.

joyce

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