One Stands Apart

Six white daffodils
Five are planted together
And one stands apart.
Are the five talking about
The one with a broken heart?

© 2008 Joyce Greene (All rights reserved)

Great idea

This is a lovely springtime image, Joyce, but with an edge. We think of gossips, though the tone you convey is one of concern rather than criticism. And having a broken heart does make you feel very lonely, separate and on your own.

thanks for your thoughtful comment!

I appreciate your very insightful comment. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my poem.

joyce

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