One Stands Apart
Six white daffodils
Five are planted together
And one stands apart.
Are the five talking about
The one with a broken heart?
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Six white daffodils
Five are planted together
And one stands apart.
Are the five talking about
The one with a broken heart?
© 2008 Joyce Greene (All rights reserved)
Great idea
This is a lovely springtime image, Joyce, but with an edge. We think of gossips, though the tone you convey is one of concern rather than criticism. And having a broken heart does make you feel very lonely, separate and on your own.
thanks for your thoughtful comment!
I appreciate your very insightful comment. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my poem.
joyce