Scuttling Claws in my Dreams

Written by Joyce Greene
3/18/08

Eliot's images made me shiver,
Scuttling claws and yellow fogs.
Hopkins' beauty made my heart soar,
Daylight's dauphin and dappled things.
Poets' songs were the music of my dreams.

At Syracuse U, some time ago,
I met my true love in Lit class.
Soon came marriage and a baby,
But we shared no happy ending,
My Prince vanished and stole my songs.

Money now became my passion.
All those accounts that must be balanced,
All those problems that must be solved.
Few thoughts left for dear J. Alfred,
I had become a hollow man.

Then one day the fog lifted,
I discovered the Poetry blog,
Where even fledgling poets,
Feel inspired to sing their songs.
The poetic spirit is reborn.

CLAWS

Joyce.....I think you have heard the mermaids singing each to each...Ezmerelda

the sirens of poetry?

It's amazing how many wonderful images there are in that poem. So many times they have come back to me, even when I was far away from poetry. I have wondered if the mermaids were actually the sirens or just sexy women communicating in the social world. Your own experiences really help you interpret the images. What do you think? Thanks for your input. I continue to enjoy your poems.

Joyce

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