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the hot-air balloon, in Albuquerque

Posted April 12th, 2008 by joyce

Written by Joyce Greene
4/11/08

blue sky loves the light
so a second sun is born,
a bright red balloon,
shimmering colors hover
through my tears, I stare in awe

spartan

On April 12th, 2008 raskin says:

beautiful. raskin

thanks, raskin

On April 12th, 2008 joyce says:

I appreciate your comment. I am again enjoying your work. You seem to like new forms, maybe you would like the tanka. All you have to do is put your emotion into that format. Not a piece of cake, but certainly worth the effort!

joyce

I really like the title!

On April 12th, 2008 yumanite says:

I really like the title!

Thanks

On April 13th, 2008 joyce says:

thanks, you are too kind

joyce

beautiful Joyce

On April 12th, 2008 willow says:

I loved this one Joyce especially the line `through my tears, I stare in awe` a very touching ending to a beautiful poem a great read from Willow.

thanks, willow

On April 13th, 2008 joyce says:

writing these poems bring back a lot of strong memories. It is good not to forget. Thanks for your poems and for commenting on mine.

joyce

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