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tiny hummingbird

Posted April 17th, 2008 by joyce

Written by Joyce Greene
4/16/08

tiny hummingbird
flies with swiftly beating wings
in all directions
as i've whirled through daily chores
have i turned away from love?

great poem Joyce

On April 17th, 2008 willow says:

sometimes when we are busy we miss the beauty around us like your humming bird and maybe too late to notice it all.your poem tells me just that .
I do hope I interpreted it right, we should all stop for a moment and look around us. loved this piece from Willow

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On April 17th, 2008 yobarney says:

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poetry is in the eye of the beholder

On April 18th, 2008 joyce says:

Your interpretation is great, willow! Every person who reads a poem can come away with their own feelings about it. Thanks for your feelings - they are always warm and wonderful!

joyce

BEEEAAAUUUTIFUL!

On April 17th, 2008 yobarney says:

So I'm expecting this cute ;ittle poem about a hummingbird... and all of sudden... "Have I turned away from love?" ...This poem is says so much with so little.... It truly is BEEEAAAUUUTIFUL!

you get Five Yobarneys!

Ray AKA yobarney

thanks, yobarney!

On April 18th, 2008 joyce says:

I love your poetry, too! You make me happy. Thanks for the wonderful comment.

joyce

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