Confusion

I'm desperate for an answer
To the voices in my head.
All at once, they speak to me,
And I don't know what they said!
I've tried to pacify them,
Even tried to shut them out.
They seem so very bitter,
But I don't know what about!

Provoking

I know how this feels, you've got so many things zinging through your brain all saying different things at the same time it's impossible to work out what to do! You've managed to write this with a slight funny note to it, which makes it even more thought-provoking. Keep it up, ♥

Good Piece

Reads easy and flows well,
Dave

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