I am leavin you, but only my body.
When I leave I give to you,
All the thing you want me too.
When I go, don’t ask why,
There will be peace, after you cry.
When you miss me,
Remember I did not flee.
Wonderful are our precious memories.
When you’re angry because I am not there,
Please be calmer, remember I cared.
When you think I am not around,
Lift your head, I will be found.
When you wished I didn’t go,
I will be there, Just so you know.
Our love is a special because I care.
Though I am gone, Somewhere out there,
I am Forever with you,
I say this knowing it's true.
I was glad to be the one who had all of you,
My sweet children, I love you from when you were new,
I am here to see you through,
So when I have to leave,
Please remember it's only my body.
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I like this poem,it caught
I like this poem,it caught me alittle of gaurd at the end.
Spoken word?
Hello
Nice work.
I too was a little loss in the end.
Maybe if you shorten some of the sentences.
I am not writer myself I just write.
One thing to remember:
Some might not agree with the word you say.
However, the words you say are your story to tell.
No one can tell your story as well as you.
The way you tell your story is what makes it sell.
God bless you,
Preacher
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I meant that the end of your
I meant that the end of your poem caught me off gaurd in a good way.
At first I thought it was about breaking up with someone,then the end really brought the poem into perspective.Nice work!
Thank you
I am truly sorry for the delay in my thanking you for your words, they are verry encuraging and thank you for taking the time to read it, how ever i am currently working a way to end this one a little better for reading, so keep a look out .
thanks once again.
hey
this poem is awsome and i hope when i leave my kids will know how much i love them and cared for them !!!