My world

Hello everyone
Welcome

Now get the fuck in line

Lines for everything
Sex
Race
Religion
Ethnicity
Age

Billboards float in the sky
Everyone exactly same

" Separate. Clean. Strong."

Daily police parol the city
Shooting children
Women
Anything that disobeys

The air is awfully empty
Of life
Real life
Organic life

A glass covering surrounds the city
" 2 Foot Transparent Laminated Bulletproof Glass!"

Still not thick enough to cover up the stench
Many dead birds lie around the edge of the structure
Its beginning to pile up

I have forgotten all sounds
Except, hahaha
oooohhh
Except for foot steps

Made by black
Italian leather
Boots

Hope you had fun
Now please

Kneel
Its 12 o'clock

Interesting Write

Reads like you see many restrictions in modern society and modern day life. In a western civilisation that is supposedly free, as in freedom of speech/movement etc. Big brother taking over and wanting to control far too much of our daily life. I'm inclined to agree a bit on that score!
Alternativly, your world is Basra, in which case it's a factual write.......and you should think about moving!
Interesting read,
Dave

Thanks

I'm glad you enjoyed it, and yes, i plan to move very soon.
Thanks again
alex

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