Belief

Faith is an excuse
For waiting
For fear
Of the world

But I do have faith
I believe

in hard work
in the power to change
in the drive of people

Not in miracles

ah the ever mythical power

ah the ever mythical power of change.

i love the poem. and i can also agree with it on an existential level.

great job.

the feedback is

the feedback is appreciated-- thank you. Keep writing-- i anxiously wait for your next poems =D

i'm sorry but i can't agree

i'm sorry but i can't agree with delirium-the-prize... the poem does not read well, i don't understand the structure and all in all i'm not a big fan. but keep trying, you have the right idea.

still...

Even though the feedback was negative-- i appreciate it... i'll keep the structure comment in mind. thanks.

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