Belief
Faith is an excuse
For waiting
For fear
Of the world
But I do have faith
I believe
in hard work
in the power to change
in the drive of people
Not in miracles
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Faith is an excuse
For waiting
For fear
Of the world
But I do have faith
I believe
in hard work
in the power to change
in the drive of people
Not in miracles
ah the ever mythical power
ah the ever mythical power of change.
i love the poem. and i can also agree with it on an existential level.
great job.
the feedback is
the feedback is appreciated-- thank you. Keep writing-- i anxiously wait for your next poems =D
i'm sorry but i can't agree
i'm sorry but i can't agree with delirium-the-prize... the poem does not read well, i don't understand the structure and all in all i'm not a big fan. but keep trying, you have the right idea.
still...
Even though the feedback was negative-- i appreciate it... i'll keep the structure comment in mind. thanks.