Detachment
I’ve tried
To be omitted
from your thoughts
unalike
Your stumble
into my mind
loathing your views
feeling as if I’ve lost something
which
by no means was ever present
you impair me
with silence
with urgency
to flee from my portrait of life
your voice awakens me
your touch sharpens me
and your detachment
strengthens me
test me
of my stability
I am standing by
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I enjoyed the way you
I enjoyed the way you portrayed your words in this piece.
THANK'S
Hi, Victoria.
I wrote these poems (and others) on Fathers day because I was feeling sad at my ex girlfriend not allowing me to see my 4yr old daughter (who's name happens to be Victoria)
For over 4 months.
I have never written anything before or since.
I Had to share them and I am happy that you like them.
Regards...Mike
victoria, i'm not sure if u
victoria,
i'm not sure if u were commenting on his or my poem-- haha... but umm if you liked mine then thanks i appreciate the feedback and if it was for him then sorry my mistake, haha.
i love your style of
i love your style of writing.is it just freestyle or what?
thanks...
yeah it's completly freestyle-- thanks for the comment! I make it up as i go along, day by day.