6 Words, 26 Lines, Priceless Lessons
6 Words, 26 Lines, Priceless Lessons
Loaded teenagers, Lets begin the perception
Further drinking, leads to added inebriation
Unclothing one another, starts the inception.
Naked with each other, displaying affection.
Question muttered, Did you bring contraception?
He answers, NO!, Protection spoils sensation.
No worries, I will pull out!
You will !, I have some doubt !
You can trust me, His shout !
Loaded, ready, firing lies in she.
I couldn’t control myself, states he.
Its only once, Whats the chances!
The two lay silent, fertilization advances!
Wide load halts their continued romances.
Time passes, he leaves, she grieves
All happening because, two didn’t believe.
In wearing a thin latex sleeve.
During a moment of impaired relieve.
Trust finally arrives, birth cries announcing !
Innocent baby, six pounds, seven ounces.
Your now both, Mom and Dad.
Still a child yourself, So sad
A moment of young drunken passion.
A lifetime born of twos action.
Add yourself not to this list.
Contraception will avoid much, Please insist!
PJC 04/15/08
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Patrick...
How the heck did i miss this one. We should hang this one up in all the hallways of every highschool in the world....and maybe the middle schools too...
very clever writing. you are good!
Linda
High Schools
Patrick J. Callahan
Linda,
You are so perceptive!!!
This is actually a rewrite of an earlier edition, I was asked to edit specifically for the purpose you mention.
This actually was set to a background picture, framed and provided to several High Schools recently.
So happy you also noticed the credibility of this write and its message and purpose.
Patrick
How unbeleivably great is that? you must feel so proud that you were asked to do that! and if it helped even one kid, it is well worth it.
nice going Patrick, "you're the man!", as they say...
Linda
ps im curious about the background picture..was it of a young pregnant mother?
Background Picture
Patrick J. Callahan
Great afternoon to you Linda, The background to this poem consists of a young pregnant mother to be ,navigating the hallways of an inner city school during class changes, many students in the shot, but she is more pronounced being at 8 months and the focus of the camera, The photo is actually real and not fabricated, she was 16 years old giving birth to twin girls 5 months ago.
Additionally both mother and children are fine today, and the mother is still attending school, with one more year until graduation.
Unfortunately this is not the normal outcome of situations such as this.
Thank you for your interest and your comments dear.
Patrick
Thank you for telling me about this. so very interesting.
Again, how nice for you they used your poem to help kids.
Linda