Butterfly
Butterfly, Butterfly
Send me a sign
A fraction,
A flake
Of something divine
Butterfly, Butterfly
I know you're not gone
You still see the sea
And me
And the dawn
Butterfly, Butterfly
Please keep us alive
Give us the strength
To believe
And to thrive
Butterfly, Butterfly
We'll meet in the sky
'Till then have my love
I miss you
Butterfly
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Multiple Meanings
loni,
I'm fairly convinced that this piece has multiple meanings contained in its verses. I like the fact that the reader is free to come to his/her own conclusions.
Write on,
Pete
thank you
the poem developed after I decided the metephor would be a butterfly. very glad you could find personal meaning in this!
loni balogna
You're Welcome
loni,
You will find that I am one of the most generous commenters on this site. Unfortunately that is not well reciprocated by many. I have a lot of reads, few comments.
If you have a moment you might take a taste of my offerings.
Pete
I feel this a lot...
In your poem I feel my mother's soul flying with lovely wings... A beautiful way to start the day, loni. Thanks!
joyce
thanks
the soul of a loved one was one of the meatphors, i'm glad you understood and liked it. thank you for your comment
loni balogna
its beautiful
its beautiful