~I"m So into the Dunes~
One sultry late afternoon
Tucked in between that sandy dune
I lay my blanket on the scorching sand
Oh, what a glorious piece of land
Down in a valley of these crescent shaped mounds
Was a silence so peaceful, and hardly a sound
Secluded enough and no one too near
My bikini slid over my thighs and left me bare
A gentleman watches me from over the hill
I notice he is getting an incredible thrill
He’s staring intently with determined eyes
He thinks I don’t see him, he’s in for a surprise
Taking off my top my breasts perk up for the breeze
My fingers slide past and my nipple gets squeezed
The sun beats down on my body so pure
My womanly instincts kick in, that’s for sure!
I lay down on the blanket and spread apart my knees
This is going to look sexy, I know he’ll agree
My legs open wide and they eagerly split
I suck on my finger, and it glides over my clit.
My hips rotate and rise to meet my stroking sensation
I sense my man likes his new beach fascination
He’s moving closer now and peering over the dune
This is such a fun thing to do on this hot afternoon….
It’s so steamy and hot in this sandy hollow
I get up to swim and that man he follows
I wade in the water naked, up to my waist
He swims over to me and asks for a taste
I say no and I’m cool now and I run back to my spot
He yells over “okay, please continue I like watching a lot”
I’m intrigued now and I wonder if I’m daring enough
I roll over my hand and start to get rough.
I raise up my body and writhe on my hand
This slippery feeling is just what I’d planned
Swollen lips, enlarging clit, faster then slow
I hope that guy is filming this incredible show
Here it comes now, that sensual peak
I’m getting dizzy and oh God, my body is weak
The juices inside me beginning to surge
My hand, my lover has begun to submerge
His moaning, and breathing are stoking my fires
These long orgasms are what I desire
Here it comes now…. ready or not….
God, I love taking care of myself, a lot!
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Wow my Friend
This was really really great. a gal that is not afraid to write it.Love it
Gloria
GLORIAAAAA....
Thanks so much for saying that! I was a little afraid to write it and POST it but i figured, "what the heck" and took a chance...afterall, its part of life isnt it??
IF... we are all honest about it....
thanks so much, you rock girl!
Linda
I guess my disguise worked ...
Ronald J. Edwards
Trinity Ink
http://trinityinkexperiencestrengthandhope.blogspot.com
I was hoping you didn't recognize that it was me in the dunes. Thank you Linda for a wonderful afternoon on the beach. Oh and yes I was taping it all, catch it on "YouTube" hahahaha
great write, sure got my motor running
ron
Ron...
My motor was humming too...just from the write...glad you liked it.
Linda
Geez..
Lindahh... you really know how to ignite a poem and make it sizzle...sssss... oh, i also liked how you categorized this 1 as well (lolz)~B.E.Coast
Hi there Bryce!!!
Thanks! Glad my poem sizzled for ya...LOL...
let me tell you, it was sizzlin' hot in those dunes....
Linda
thanks for reading ...i appreciate it
Linda, Linda, Linda
This was soooo unbelievably erotic I just had to light up a cigarette after I read it! And then I wanted to read it again!!! LOL
I am so happy you decided to post this. I think we all agree...you should never hesitate to put up your sexy writes. We all love it!
Oh...by the way...can I please go swimming with you???
Your friend, TJ
thanks Tj
Thank you TJ I'm glad you liked it. i dont know where im getting the nerve to post these...lol
but its fun.
anyways, thanks for the kind comment, T J!!!!
linda
:*)
Bloody Hell!!!
Again!! Lol.
Very erotic/sexual write, wonderfully handled (if that's an expression that can be used here!).
Great piece!
Dave
LOL...thanks Dave!!!
Thought I'd try something a little more daring this time.....LOL..
I kinda liked it myself...glad you did too!
dave, as always, i appreciate your comments on my poems! thanks
Linda
Linda
Well my dear, this piece was never boring for one moment. You paint such a sensual picture with your words and I'm sure the guy in the piece had a little something deposited in his trunks. You are one ballsy broad my friend.
Your good friend,
Woody (er ah) Pete
Peter
LOL, dont know where im getting the nerve to write these and post them...just figured...why not?
thanks Pete
i appreciate your comments
Linda
Linda
Isn't it funny that if I were to write something this exlicit I would be chastised for being a nasty pervert but when you write it and post it it gets rave reviews...go figure!
Pete
Its not fair!
Its not fair! this kind of thing never happens on the beaches I go for a walk on. I think this kind of thing needs to be encouraged, it will get more people out walking!
Enjoyed the poem Linda
Andrew
LOL I agree
Yeah, let's encourage more of it...LOL great idea.
I'm all for it...:)
Andrew, your new poem should have been posted right under mine...would have been funny to have the both of them together...
thanks for liking my poem
i always appreciate it
Linda
I'm Sorry
I'm sorry but if I saw you rubbing your crotch
I would have to do more than watch
If I were the man, I would cop a feel
A man that just watches cannot be real
Unless he was a preacher who did'nt want to sin
Because if it were me I'd start rubbing your skin
And telling you, encouraging you on what to do
All the while stroking myself getting it ready for you
Hearing the waves breaking all around
All mixed in with your moaning sounds
I know you want to see what we can make
Together we can make the levy break
Ray AKA Yobarney