Into you
You embrace me
Without touch, you
lure me, swallow me
tempt me
toward your gravity.
you approach me,
my strength is
gone
I cave again
Into you.
Your force is strong
I free fall
With all this love
Into your gravity
You’re on to me
Once more.
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beautiful Linda
this was just beautiful a great poem of love hey do you want to swap husbands lol from Willow
LOL!!!!
hmmmmmm.....interesting...haha
Linda
from Willow
we gotta laugh Linda lol from Willow
Exactly!
What else is there to do....but laugh?
thats what it all about anyways....
Linda
into your poem
Very nice poem... I take it to be more about lust then love though because of the line "My strength is gone"
true love makes one stronger... where as lusting for someone can make you weak
Keep up the great work!
Ray AKA Yobarney
Ray...very observant
This poem is about lust. and youre right, lusting for someone does make you weak!..
Thank you for your kind words about the poem.
i appreciate it.
Linda