Red,red wine
Ah…Wine
red…
I swirl you
around,
and you
you, with your
clingy legs,
your legs
so long
and lean
so silky smooth,
you
engulf the
roundness of
the orb,
grasping onto
nothing,
you
drape
along side
of the glass
dragging
ever so slowly
down, down
the sides
of the goblet
slow, and slower
still
like thick tears
of molasses
til
I think
I’ll die wanting.
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Beautiful!
Another masterpiece vivid imagery robust flavor and flow!
hugs
vic
Vic, thanks!
mmm.... i could almost taste it while writing it too!
thanks for the comments!
linda
A good year?
This reminds me of a really great wine in a good year... perhaps a 'Brunello di montelcino' 1954 or 1956
Ray
Definately a good year!
Ray, the good years have the best "legs"...hmm...i thinkit was a 1955 brunello...a good year that "55"
Linda
thanks ray!
'You, You With Your Clingly Legs!'
What a fantastic description! A great poem Linda, throughly enjoyed!
DEbs :.)
Thank you debs!
LOL, I love that line too!
I appreciate it debs!
Linda
gorgeously done, linda
Extraordinarily beautiful! I loved it, Linda. A true wine lover has crafted an exceptional tribute to what she loves!
joyce
Thanks again Joyce!!!
it feels good to write something alot of people enjoy!
i appreciate your kind comments.
writng poetry is keeping my brain alert...and so are all these "math problems"..my addtion is getting better...i hope they dont start using long division...
Linda