You Felt Like Home
My eyes absorbed you
And I jumped full force
Into your world
With no remorse
I couldn’t help it
The connection was strong
You felt like home
Even though it was wrong
It was deep within
Right down to my soul
I can’t explain it
You made me feel whole
I wonder how many
Feel love this true
When it came my way
I had to pursue
You are within me
All through my heart
I’ll always love you
Even though we’re apart
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Linda,
Such heartfelt emotion beautifully displayed, realization, explanation, flirtation, sensation, re - evaluation
Great effort, positive return, With no remorse fits very well when expressing true emotions.
Yes Patrick, Heartfelt Emotion...it's there
Thank you so much!! Your comments have made my day...
Patrick, I love, love, love the encouragement I get from you on my poems. I feel it helps me with my writing. It is greatly appreciated.
Oh Yeah,.. ......I'm backkkkkkk.... to reality! Yay!
Linda :)
Linda
This was a very heartfelt poem... it sure got to mine:-). It's great 2 see your 'softer' side again(lolz)~~B.E.Coast
Yeah Bryce...
Man, What got into to me huh? I think I left this earth for awhile. Dont even know how it happened....I'm glad my softer side is back too....
Thank you for the compliment on this poem being heartfelt. because it truly was....~
ps, and thanks for welcoming me back...
Linda
No No...
.. Not saying that you shot off to jupiter or anything, but it's great that the other Linda comes to visit us now and again ) Please, you're free to delve right back to the 'otherside' any time you feel like it.. that's what the showcase is all about~~B.E.Coast
YES YES...
Not to worry Bryce, that other Linda will surely be back .... I know myself too well.... :) AND I like her too....LOL
its good to mix it up...
thanks Bryce
really good
hey what happend to all the sexy stuff huh lol....this ones great linda,I'd love to know who's it about,care to share?Ricklovin
a heartfelt poem, linda
I could feel your strong emotion. Very well done.
joyce
Joyce
Thanks so much. {Nice to see you back from vacation too.}
Yes this was from my heart...
Linda
{sigh}
You know I know...great write as always and thanks for sharing!
Stay well, One love and God bless!
TS........
Thank you so much.
.... and yes, i know you know...
hope all is well
Linda
this is a lovely one...tho i
this is a lovely one...tho i haven't commented much on your work...i do read them and they are good,keep up the good work,kmakes it worthwhile to come here and read all you and other talents belt out
Nice mimi, thanks
mimi, you are so nice to say that. thank you.
i appreciate you reading my poetry. it is hard to read and comment on everyone. there arent enough hours in the day...LOL
Linda