your girl
Your girl
If I were your girl
It would be so much fun
We’d have a picnic
Under the sun
then I suppose
on the blanket we’d
lay, looking up at
the clouds til
I heard you say,
“do you see that
heart up way in the sky?”
that’s mine, take it,
its yours til I die.
then you’d lean on
over to kiss
and id purse up my
lips, “SMACK”,
nothing sweeter than this.
(to mike, back in 10th grade)
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Wonderful!
Love it! Very sweet and lighthearted. The "SMACK" made me laugh, haha nice!
your nice
thanks ChuckRickman, for your kind words about the poem. it was supposed to be just that...lighthearted and fun!
Linda
very nice poem, Linda
Looking up at the clouds is such a great thing to do with someone you love. Very well written - it flows and sings. Thanks.
joyce
Thanks Joyce
Just a fun poem and it reminds me of when i used to look at the clouds as a kid and try to find images out of them.
thanks for your input.
Linda