Real Love
I have pity, for the soul
Who lust and not love
to feast, and not taste
To feel the beauty, without seeing
The thrill of compassion,
By only listening
Looking into the soul, in time
It is there, they will find
That everything else in the world
stands still,
when the presence
of the soul mate is found..
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Brilliant Luckygrinn
Wow, This poem of yours has a great message ...i just love it. It is so well written and to the point.
AND...so true, so true! Nice going!
Linda :)
Thanks Linda..
I see alot of people now days stay together for other reasons than love, and it just inspired this piece, Thanks , Luckygrinn
Looking but not Feeling
There was a great deal of truth to your words in this piece. Lonliness stays lonely until it finds a mate.
Pete
hmmm
hey lovely piece...