Real Love

I have pity, for the soul
Who lust and not love

to feast, and not taste

To feel the beauty, without seeing

The thrill of compassion,
By only listening

Looking into the soul, in time
It is there, they will find

That everything else in the world
stands still,
when the presence
of the soul mate is found..

Brilliant Luckygrinn

Wow, This poem of yours has a great message ...i just love it. It is so well written and to the point.
AND...so true, so true! Nice going!
Linda :)

Thanks Linda..

I see alot of people now days stay together for other reasons than love, and it just inspired this piece, Thanks , Luckygrinn

Looking but not Feeling

There was a great deal of truth to your words in this piece. Lonliness stays lonely until it finds a mate.

Pete

hmmm

hey lovely piece...

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