The Hammer
I gave her the hammer;
pounding harder with every stoke
Harder and harder
I drove it down
Deep down her throat
The screaming turn to tears
Then from tears to silence
Oh what a thrill ride, I gave my love
As I take my hammer
and wipe off the blood..
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ouch.....
I'd never wanna fall in love with you man!!.....hehehe,however it was very unique and I thought it had alot of meaning....you just have to think about it a while to fully understand the style of this write....I liked!
Thanks..
I was just thinking how some twisted killers (not me!) have got off sexually by killing people and thought I would mix it in together.. Glad you liked. Thanks, Luckygrinn
hehehe,ok im glad that not ur personality....
I was afraid I would have nightmares after that read,but you just reassured me now,hehee.....well if you wanted to go for the twisted affect ,u did it well.
wow...
Luckygrinn...hmm..very different, but i do like it.
yeah, very different...LOL
Linda
different, definitely
I love how you mixed a more traditional style with a very "fresh" subject
loni balogna