Longing For Hell (*WARNING*)

Chant the Holy Scriptures from the infernal depths of hell
Failing to heed the whispers, from Satan’s lips they fell.
Endeavour to raise the magma from the home of hate and death
Trying to bring a halt too the continuation of thy breath.

Thy lord of denigration of corpses and of sin
On bended knee I pledge too thee, thy soul and all thy kin,
To dwell in fiery torment by the throne from which thee rules
And suffuse thy soul with the flames the saints declare as cruel.

Too live in hell, thy lived thy life, for certain damnation
Marauding through the ages and destroying creation,
Thy eternal lord of nothingness, king of all life’s end
I bow too thee, emperor of night, thy solemn infernal friend.
04/09/08 ADO

Just to clarify

This isn't actually how I've ever felt, I was just trying to see how far into character I could get. Trust me (there's an audio to go with this) scarey!

Anyway

THANKS!!!

For reading.

This Is Good

Enjoyed the read very much, you played the character very well, good write,
Dave

SATAN!

SATAN!

Thanks mate

It came quite quick after listening to Venom's - Cast in Stone which also is not often listened to.

A RARITY FROM ME!

Thanks MR Gibbs

lycon...

ok,,,, thats gonna give me nightmares!, lol.
naa, really tho, it was very well done and well worded....you gave the reader a sense of discomfort and unease in quite a short write, it felt unnatural and wrong, but one could not stop reading half way, good job.peace.

Thank pal

I know what you mean, A few hours after I wrote this I read it back and it chilled me.

Thanks for taking the time to read mate.

BRAVO!and as we Scots say,"Give us another, BARDY?

BRILLIANT AGAIN!MORE POWER TO YOUR WRITES!THES WILL DO ME ALLRIGHT!I BOW TO YOUR WORDS THE BARD OF THE BARRIER REEF!LOL.........IS THAT IN AUSTRALIA?

Thanks again mate

Yeah you got it The Barrier Reef is just off our coast line.
Thanks again for your time mate.

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