never in a million years would your written words offend me!you are a real writer of eartfelt poetry and i dont approve you ever changing the way you so eloquently write ,dont ever amend anything!just write another version of the same message!get what i mean?i love to watch a budding poet at work!supreme!tell it like you have done!i only pass comments when they are welcome!i would never dream of criticising anything ever writ!the caces of the past were all writ on by geniuses who would soon learn how to evolve to newspapers and art galleries.as thats where your poetry will be heading for!every little mistake you think johnlennon made sold for 2 buks?you can name your price for old scribles love!to the poet,it is not important enogh to criticise!and if there is a lot of criticism then you have a queer lot of followers but never the less it is making you a name!get it?so you be you uniuue!Lynett Moody who outshines the moody BLUES!lolkeep entertaining us,and thanks for taking the time to say,hallo!cheers