Boy You Got Me

Boy you got me gigglin'
Got this smile upon my face
And every time I talk to you
my heart begins to race

Boy you got me dreamin'
Got me driftin' far away
I can't even concentrate
on anything today

Please
Just
Tell
Me
How
I'm
Gonna
Keep
Myself
From
Falling
Falling
Falling
Hopelessly
For
You

Boy you got me singin'
Got this music in my soul
I just want to belt it out
I'm losing all control

Boy you got me achin'
Got me wantin' all the time
Now you got me wonderin'
How I can make you mine

Please
Just
Tell
Me
How
I
Can
Keep
Myself
From
Falling
Falling
Falling
Completely
In
Love
With
You

Ah Hell, Why Fight The Feeling

Madam,

I do like the way you worded and structured this story of unsure attraction that is bringing out the best in you. I would say to take a leap of faith and see if this guy will sing with...in harmony.

Once again,

Pete

Pete~

Thank you for reading and for the advice. I'm not sure about the guy yet, it seems as if he has many admirers other than myself.

Always,

~Nell

Self-Assurance

Nell,

That's when you step up your play and raise the stakes on the pretenders standing there in your way. I'm not necessarily saying for you to go "all in" but you can raise the pot to see where the interest really lies.

You go girl,

Pete

Pete~

Wow, you're doing wonders for my ego. I shall forever be indebted to you! Ok, I will and I'll keep you posted!

Always,

~Nell

nice

I love this one,it flows so well...the guy in the poem would be lucky to have you nell...great write.....Ricklovin

...

Thank you Rick. You are too kind.

Hi Nell

You gotta read my piece called "It Rhymes With Swell but What The Hell"

Remember, you challenged me.

Your Buddy,

Pete

Pete~

I did...I like it! It's very cute. Thank you!

~Nell

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