DEEPLY DEPRESSED

Im feeling rather distant
Im in a world I do not like
Doubting people a round me
Feeling tiered all of the time
No energy to do things
Just letting things pass by
A feeling of unwanted ness
I just want to cry
Lock my self in a dark room
Let the day and night pass by
Let the world forget me
Why I fade and die.

i feel like this at times too

It's hard to describe what it feels like to be depress you have done a good job in doing so, maybe this will help others to understand what it can be like.
keisha

Love is always stronger then pain.

it is what it is

Ronald J. Edwards
Trinity Ink
http://trinityinkexperiencestrengthandhope.blogspot.co

Marwee,

Nobody cares if you are depressed IF you don't, when you do they will. All good things in this world need action.
"move a muscle change a thought"
Remebering willingness and acceptance are the keys
to recovery to all that makes us ill, "it is what it is"

a boulder lays sitting and i want it to move
it stays unyielding
it is what it is

with my right foot forward i step to the side
around i go
it is what it is

i stop and i look at my feet and see
my laces untied, better than broken
it is what it is

as i bend over to fix them i think why and how
could this have happened
it is what it is

i wish words had substance cause then they'd have handles
once let go they're gone
it is what it is

the illusion in life is control of situations
the joke is on me
it is what it is

do what i want the world would certainly be better
if you'd just listen to me
it is what it is

the fact of the matter i know little or nothing
everyday is a lesson
it is what it is

so acceptance is key just to let all things be
live and let live
it is what it is

oldaspirationsneverdie...7 I

oldaspirationsneverdie...7

I can relate well to this poem! I was somewhat depressed when
I wrote a certain poem, however I intended it to be humorous and
moody and not offencsive. Would you read and review my poem
"Must Be A First, But Not Me"?--I would appreciate your honest
opinion! Back to your poem, "Deeply Depressed", it is very
well conceived and your thoughts ring with the steeple bells
and everyone has heard and felt those strong feelings of sorrow
and depression! Your theme is well expressed!

Great poem

I can feel it depressness from reading the poem

Depression

I've been sad before but I dont ever remember feeling like this poem. If this is the true description of depression than now I know why so many take their own lives. I felt the feeling coming over me as I read your words but snapped out of it by going to the refrigerator and getting me a Coca Cola. Have a coke and a smile. Great write.

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