Cosmos Revisited

Cosmos Revisited
© 2008 Mark Pearce

I licked the cosmos.

It tasted like minty ice cream.
The stars like sugar sprinkles.
The planets like dirty worms.

The texture was uneven,
Galaxies being what they are,
But most of ‘em were swirly.

A delicious endeavor,
This intergalactic sampling,
But then my tongue hit a dark hole
And my face disappeared.

It’s sitting up there somewhere
Locked within the confines
Of an event horizon.

A surprised look
Frozen for eternity.

Images..

I love the images you have created in this write, and the opening line captures the readers attention from the beggining.
I felt very drawn to this piece.

DEbs

Cosmos Revisited

Thanks DEBs --

This was one of those "it came to me quicklies." I wish they were all like that.

Mark Pearce
www.marzguy.deviantart.com

really funny

loved the set up and the punch line, great. Thanks for the laugh. raskin

Cosmos Revisited

I've always felt that poetry could convey more than emotion...it can provide insightful laughs too.

Thanks for the comment.

Mark Pearce
www.marzguy.deviantart.com

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