Post Titled Poem # 2
Post Titled Poem # 2
by Mark Pearce © 2006
From the opening, you’d never guess
The winding, cavernous space within.
The team assembled
Projecting a strange aura – of confidence, fear and excitement.
Going where few have gone before.
Damp and dank and creepy,
With only one light,
The team of explorers communicate
As if they have done this a thousand times before.
Peeking around each other –
Squinting into the darkness.
Few words spoken
As the solitary light probes nook shadows
Moisture.
Strange formations.
Tight spaces.
Then a rumble. Near sub-audible
From somewhere deep within.
The explorers look at each other.
Slightly surprised
But not scared.
No. Not scared at all.
Just slightly amused.
Perhaps they’re familiar with the source of the ghostly wail.
Perhaps it will not bring down
Millions of tons of earthly wrath upon them.
Perhaps not.
But there is danger.
Someone could be sentenced to death here.
It could happen even to the most innocent among us.
As the journey ends
Someone comes to.
The adventure, seeming nothing but a dream.
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Marzguy...
well,....you had my full attention the whole way...what a great ending...you must be fifty...or older to know about this one..LOL!!! nice poem
Linda
Thanks Linda. I like the
Thanks Linda.
I like the attention comment. It means a lot to know there's not a lot of "I've got to get through this now that I've started it" going on.
Post reveals are tricky. You want the reader to go "ah-HA" and not "you bastard, you tricked me." I hope that it came across that I treated the reader with respect.
Mark Pearce
www.marzguy.deviantart.com
Mark...
Total respect, not to worry! I like the way you write. I like poems that keep me interested.
Linda
A great poem
Very clever idea, I liked this alot, have read it now a few times, and the more I read it the funnier I find it, now knowing the title, great poem.
Andrew
Post Titled Poem # 2
Thanks Andrew1.
A re-read is quite an honor. I ak humbled by the time you've spent with the piece.
Mark Pearce
www.marzguy.deviantart.com