The Note

The Note
© 2007 Mark Pearce

A drop of water
Had marred the note.
It must have been raining
That sunny day.

“I’m happy without you,"
Is what she wrote.
No one else knows
But it's raining today.

marzguy

I love this poem. You write beautifully.

Linda

The Note

Thank you, Linda.

I think this one speaks to the reticence we have in recognizing pain.

Mark Pearce
www.marzguy.deviantart.com

Yes mark, i agree

i love that poem because it really makes you think hard. and about the pain. its sad because for some its a sunny day but not for the writer of that poem. it was just written so beautifully! you found all the "right" words!!!!
Linda

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