Between Me YouAnd God
Mirror Loop is a poetry style I created myself. ""
The structure of this poem is written so that the poem can be read from the beginning to end and then back again from it’s end to the beginning. ""
The poem can be of any theme, but must have proper meter.""
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My Example""
Between Me You And God ""
Always and forever is God within man and woman Soul and body the heart and mind .
The grace of receiving a wonder of presence or occasion .
An unexplainable something beyond understanding .""
Pathways overgrown in mystery beyond time In hanging gardens .
Secret wisdoms seeds sewn .
From things unseen are faith in deed and action .
God is good how true it is .
Miracles are there when God is commanding .""
Commanding is God when there are miracles .
Is it true how good God is .
Action and deed in faith are unseen things from sewn seeds.
Wisdoms secret gardens
hanging in time beyond mystery in overgrown pathways .""
Understanding beyond something unexplainable .
An occasion or presence of wonder .
A receiving of grace .
The mind and heart .
The body and soul .
Woman and man within God is forever and always .""
By Paul McCann
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Good job
Very good poem. I read it backwards and understood it.
Please check out my two blogs Reginald Levi Walker and The U. S. Army Ranger a poetic series.
God bless you
Reginald L. Walker
Not Anger But Action will solve the problems in our nieghbor-HOOD.
Bless You
Thnaks Reg .
I read your blog and see how committed you are to God .
May the Lord continue to inspire you and protect you in all you do .