Comforting Thoughts
This Mirror Loop structure is a style I created myself.
The structure of this poem is written so that the poem can be read from the beginning to end and then back again from it’s end to the beginning.
The poem can be of any theme, but must have proper meter.
My Example
Comforting Thoughts
Miracles .
Gods present evidence lives .
Souls relaxed on cushions,
comforting corners
passages weaving .
Imagine turning cogs round and round .
Spinning thoughts,
synchronizing.
Soulful and physic.
Physic and soulful.
Synchronizing thoughts spinning round and round .
Cogs turning .
Imagine weaving passages.
Corners comforting cushions on relaxed souls
Lives like evidence present Gods miracles.
By Paul McCann
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wow!
how'd u do that man?
that was really clever and I loved it, thanks 4 sharing.
Gods Gift
Poetry is something I see and images are only a product of how words are structured . I am constantly creating new structures for using in writing poetry .
If you would like to view some of my structures here are some links to those .
New Poetry Form
http://www.abctales.com/story/mcscraic/new-poetry-form
Some More On Poetry Form -
http://www.poetryscriber.com/Blog/Doctor-Write/Some+More+On+Poetry+Form....
More On Poetry Form -
http://www.authorsden.com/visit/viewarticle.asp?AuthorID=7865&id=37041
Poetry Form-
http://www.poetryscriber.com/Blog/Doctor-Write/Poetry+Form.htm
Bless you and you're work .