Take me as I am

You want me to be something I am not
You want me to but I cannot
if I did, I would just rot
Why do you have to put me on the spot

Take me as I am or not at all
I can’t be at your beck and call
if you can’t, you can take a stroll
why do you just want me to crawl

I want to be me, just me
but why can’t you see
I just want to be me, free
to be all that I can be

Let me be, let me fly
Im tired, I don’t want to cry
my life it feels plain and dry
let me give my dreams a try

very good Mona

I loved this one Mona I think a lot can relate to this one, and you are right in saying you just want to be me dont change for anyone Mona eveyone has their own Characteristics,and nobody should expect change from them its what makes them who they are .thanks for the read,
a very good subject well written from Willow

I agree with willow...

I can relate to this poem and you go for those dreams whatever they are...nice one mona;]

thanks

willow, thanks.you are right, we are all uniquely made. it is wrong for anyone to change or try to change anyone.it especially happens in relationships.when we try to be who we are not we die a slow death.
repenter: you seem to be aware of who you are.i like that!i am trying to give my dreams a shot. we can never give up.may yours to publish come true!

good write

i like this poem i can so relate to it.
All guy's just wanna change the woman there with.
It so annoys me.
keep it up.

fiona

fiona, most do, dont

fiona, most do, dont they.probably a reflection of their own insecurity

god yeah

men are so insecure its unbelievable

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