Young, Hurtful Souls
Let's put ourselves in their shoes
Let's take time to understand why they act the way they do
They're tired
Tired of being surrounded by liars
Tired of seeing bags underneath my eyes
Developed from the lonely night cries
They're tired of being tired the next day from the night before
All from staying awake waiting for their mom to walk through the door
They're tired of feeling like nobody cares
Being alone, with no food to eat is too much to bare
Tired of what's suppose to be a home being a house
Of seeing parents play with their children while stuck on the inside looking out
Tired of wondering why do they have to suffer the pain
And be apart of life's hardest game
Tired of crying out when people see what's wrong
As if we don't hear the sad tune that's playing in their hurtful song
They yearn to be where they belong and desire to be
A place where they can feel good, happy, and stress free
Where they can smile, laugh, and play
But mostly, go home to a loving family at the end of each day
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Many can understand
After reading this piece it made me think of all of the people in this world who have had unhappy childhoods brought on by poor or neglectful parenting. Your true pain came through quite clearly in this piece.
You have a couple of misspellings in this piece, you might want to go back over it.
Misspellings????
What word or words have I spelled wrong? Please point them out to me because I don't see them.
Misspellings?
What word or words have I spelled wrong? Please point them out to me because I don't see them.
Here You Go
moniqueo,
Here are the misspellings:
In line 1 of stanza 6 it should read "supposed" instead of "suppose"
In line 2 of stanza 7 it should read "a part" instead of "apart".
I hope that helps.
Pete
Here You Go
No, I meant to put what's in there the way it is. There's no mistake and no changes need to be made in my opinion because that's the way that I want it to be written.
Fine with me
Just tried to be helpful.
this is a sad piece, pain
this is a sad piece, pain comes thru,hopelessness too...thank you for sharing