Emotional Castration
I count the days in eccentric fascination
to the moment of all neurological disconnection.
Detached, void & free from this heart warped with pain,
I pray paralytic ecstasy meanders thru my tortured brain!
I count the days with a compulsive agitation
to the moment of all emotional castration.
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Never thought of emotional
Never thought of emotional castration, I wish I could do that
i thought about it and
i thought about it and decided it seemed like a good description of how one would feel when they just wanna cut away all pain that they just cannot deal with anymore...
My pain never goes away, it
My pain never goes away, it haunts my every thought and move sometimes.
heavy castration
hi, the title is inspiring, your rhyme very good. the poem itself is rather too heavy, way too loaded. And the "emotional castration" made my day! - i vote it the phrase of the year 2007. A Brilliant and creative phrase indeed. - Kiprotich Arap-Ruto, Canada (Oh my God, Everypoet.net makes us do so much math! - I wonder if President GWB can handle it, if he tried?)
phrase of the year? cool!!!!
phrase of the year? cool!!!! i like that :-)))
yeah it is kinda funky isn't it. can i copyright that phrase somewhere? hehehe
Franny
good poem
This is a very good poem.Damn good title.
you described my current
you described my current state of mind on this 18th day of december.....
hey
emotional castration- woo i like -- kind of like Raping ones mind
God Bless You
Susan Jean