Moonbathe

Come moonbathe with me my sweet memory,
Here touch my skin washed in silvery balm!
Be silent while stars harmonize the lullaby
and we steal away on this moonlit calm

Come sing with me my sweetest memory,
While the moon bids us stay this night
Be still in this hour of sweet symphony
and savor my love dipped in silver delight

Come dance with me my sweet memory,
Sway in the darkness of dawn so amiss
Hurry now lest the jealous light of day
melts away your ethereal kiss!

Oh come lay with me my sweet memory
let us gaze into the velveteen skies!
Indulge in the softness of such lunar emery
while tomorrow is born in eachothers' eyes

Come love me oh sweet memory
Under gossamer stars i shall kiss your face.
Hold to the moment of this lunar ivory
Awashed in glow as we quietly moonbathe

Moonbathe

Nice work, the language feels.....I want to say luxurious - but maybe sensuous is better.
Cool.
Love and respect,

Gabe

thank you.. you captured the

thank you.. you captured the very essence of what i wanted to convey :)

Franny

Moonbathe

oldaspirationsneverdie...7

A fantastic array of vivid descriptions and I am so glad you decided to
share this poem with your audience!

Nice opening lines in your poem

Hi, your poem has nice, inviting, and exciting opening lines to each stanza! - Kiprotich Arap-Ruto, Canada

Absolute

Love... Tears... Beautiful and elegant. Outstanding. This is felt.

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