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autumn

Posted October 18th, 2007 by msmanson

leaves were dancing, leaves were brown
leaves were falling on the ground

crush them underfoot and smile
crush my heart and stay a while

2007

autumn

On November 28th, 2007 moblues says:

Ahh. Another minimalist. This is what I usually write. It's very hard to pull off. Great job, elize.

That your character doesn't care that her/his heart is broken adds a lot to this.

Mike

thank you so much. i took a

On November 28th, 2007 msmanson says:

thank you so much. i took a break from writing poetry for a few years and when i started again, this is the kind of thing that came to mind. i'm really glad you enjoyed it!

autumn

On June 8th, 2008 faeriesglance says:

I like your poem. very much.

*Lynn*
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