change

she was a pretty girl allright
up until that stormy night
for in that stormy night she heard
the crying of a dying bird

1998

yes!

that is awesome. Reminds me of the raven. I have been thinking about the subject of change for awhile, but never got a poem that had anything nearly as good as this. The simple rhyme makes it that much more enjoyable.

thank you!

Thank you so much for such a kind comment. It means so much to me, especially as this is one of my favourite poems of all the poems I've written. Thanks once again!!

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