haiku no. 1

Posted November 28th, 2007 by msmanson

*after criticising everyone's attempts at writing haiku's, here is my own really bad attempt...!!

broken bleeding hurt
with nothing left to say now
wanting this to work

2007

On November 28th, 2007 moblues says:

I don't think it was bad at all. I haven't written a haiku in a year or two. They can get addictive.

Mike

On November 28th, 2007 msmanson says:

Thanks! I'm just sitting in the office and they just jump out at me unexpectedly so i thought i should post one.

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