talk

Won't you talk with me now?
I want to get to know the girl behind those captivating eyes.
because when i'm with you, my world seems to slowly melt away.
like wax from a mediocre candle.

Won't you talk with me now?
I want to listen to your soothing voice.

Won't you talk with me now?
I want to fall asleep with you in my arms tonight.
because there's no better place than when i'm so close to you.
so close i can feel you breathe.
it's where i want to be.

i know i want you, i know i need you
so i reach out, beseech you.

So won't you talk with me now?
it's not so hard just give it a try.

So won't you talk with me now?
I want to reach out and touch the seamless beauty with my hand

Because if i can feel you, i'll know
that this ain't a dream.
i'm not dreaming.

Excellent!

I like the use of repetitive words - 'Wont you talk with me now?' It worked really well here, and sounded like a song to me.

Debs

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