Time
When the sands of time have washed away all my hopes and dreams
I pick myself up,
Dust myself off,
And go on living.
When the balloon pops and I cant watch my back,
I go on living.
When I feel like there is no more hope for me in this desolate world,
I breathe.
And I go on living.
I live.
I love.
I go on living.
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GREAT! This is by far the best piece of poetry i have read for a while. There is so much significance in your words..and it makes me feel peaceful and hopeful.
Thanks so much for sharing this.
DEbs
This is very refreshing to
This is very refreshing to read. So many of us are just ready to give up when things happen, and your poem actually feels like a cool, refreshing breeze for the soul that feels like it can't get back up and go on. It is something I believe many of us can truly appreciate. Beautiful.