REVELRY

I sat upon some tree-trunk
While waiting for my gold
Promised me by elfins;goblins young and old
I followed them,to forest glen;their magic to behold

They bid me stay for just awhile
And I would come to see
The treasures now,and later still
That they could offer me

'Round campfire bright
They danced and sang
This tiny elfin lot
And presently I found myself
In their tiny elfin pot!

revelry

This little bit of fantasy is utterly enchanting!

One dimensional fantasy

Thanks Cranky--Enjoyed your De Rien for its'depth

what a wonderful poem, the

what a wonderful poem, the ending is really cute and unexpected. not sure about the semi-colons in the first stanza, though...

funny

I liked the rhyme, it was funny and made me laugh.

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