Blue Flame

Blue electric flame, working its magic,
Violet energy, burning like a phosphorescent sapphire,
Glowing energy, dancing to the rhythm of stars,
Writhing nebula of uncertainty,
A dancing messenger from Ahura Mazda,
Surging a carbon trail through molecules of night,
The blue flame's magic exuding burning knowledge,
Separate, but part of all flames.

:)

A fully charged poem...enjoyed reading it...

- heaven

ooh...

so cool... I have to admit, I usually can't get into the short poems people write but this one was truly a gem. loved the powerful description... it was gripping... great job, shelby J.

Passionate...

oldaspirationsneverdie...7
That sapphire, is a beautiful blue... Your descriptive imagery captures
a mood of glowing delight and feelings of truth and conviction! "Knowledge"
as it is separate, and a part of all beauty, flames, heart, passion and of
course "sapphires" "...energy, dancing to the rhythm of stars,..."

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