Dream Wings

El Dorado vision ascends skyward,
Galactic trails lead out into forever,
A spinning sky 'round faint Polaris in gyrating circles,
We all drown in blackness,
Merging into a midsummer night's dream,
Pale clouds, the misty ceiling,
Cricket chorus symphony radiating out into the universe,
Life vibrating everywhere under a harvest moon,
Pallid mind streams slip into oceans of unconciousness in
the obsidian mirth of a living night,
We're all travelers in the moment before time begins,
As magic enfolds beneath a garden of starlight,
We ride the Earth's axis to another dawn,
Lifted by our dream wings.

Wow...

Great imagery...I saw myself sitting on a hill...watching the art above...

Great!

I'm glad it took you on a journey! Poetry can evoke an altered state of reality, and if this poem has that effect, I'm happy!

thanks for the ride...

that was so much fun :) I loved how you drew the reader into the poem and took us along for the journey... what a delightful treat for the senses! so enjoyable, shelby J.

Thank you!

I'm happy that this took you on a journey! I think that aesthetic poetry is a creative expression of the inner worlds of beauty that reside deep within our spiritual/creative selves. And if a poet can convey these same feelings and awarenesses to readers via poetry, then the poet's goal is achieved. Happy to share this dreamy journey......

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