Phantom Field

Pretty as a star, distant as the horizon,
You are that all-knowing mystery,
Like a dream, silent, unfathomable,
Beckoning at the edge of infinity's meadow,
Immutable, like a presence from time's beginning,
In a topaz chill,
A night city calls through silent trees of primeval dawn,
You are the dream, I am the dreamer,
The obsidian darkness pulls me beyond your unchanging essence,
In a jasmine myth,
A sea of specters float through distant passageways of the Morning Star,
The wind of dreams, alive in a sea of gems,
Phantom field, in depths of sleep,
Summoning me to rise through passages of the emerald wind.

very descriptive...

I enjoyed it very much, will read more of your work... I liked the descriptive nature of the poem, it really drew me in.

Thank You!

Thank you very much for your kind words. I had kind of a mystic vision one morning, so I wrote this poem about it. Tried to be descriptive as possible, so the reader can experience some of the vibes I was feeling.

A mystical banquet

Now I am confused! What poem of yours is my favourite! There is always a glint of precious jewels in your poetry. In this poem, those jewels create a magnetic, haunting mystique!

Just lovely as always!

Smiles and Light
AuraGem

gemstones

A long time ago, I used to be an avid rockhound. I would go to quarries and mines to look for nice mineral specimens and crystals. I also bought lots of crystals. l am still fascinated with minerals and crystals, and that's why I tend to include them in my poems....

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