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The first word: Hello.
The hardest word: I’m sorry.
Most pleasant word: I know.
The kindest ones: Don’t worry.
The sweetest: I believe.
Most wanted: I will wait.
The most unfair: Deceive.
The toughest: You are late.
Most waited for: Forgive me!
The strongest: Tell me, why?
Most desperate: Don’t leave me!
The final word: Good-bye
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strong!! very cool! nice
strong!!
very cool!
nice dynamics, rythm, rhyme and concept.
love this line:
"Most pleasant word: I know."
== we are mods, we are mods, we are-we are-we are mods!
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One of your strengths is how you begin and end a poem, as shown here.
There is always a tie-in between the first verse and the last. It's like reading
a story that has a definite beginning, middle part and conclusion. And you
never get lost along the way, never ramble or go off in strange directions.
I would say your poems, while creative and clever and sometimes fanciful,
are always well thought out. (And this one, by the way, is particularly clever.)