He

He didn’t know how much I needed you,
How cold I felt in his demanding arms.
So thirsty for the tings you used to do
I closed my heart and drank his luscious charms.

He owned my eyes, but all the tears where yours,
And they defeated dazzles in his glance.
I tried to hide behind the crystal doors
And lock them up, but lost myself at once.

He had my heart, but it was cold as ice;
For ever sad: immensity of blue.
And pain I saw inside his candy eyes;
I guess he knew how much I needed you.

I really like this poem.

I really like this poem. Although there are some desperate typos that need to be taken care of.

Kudos
/Milena

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