The Old Man

The old man trudges wearily, sullenly
To his usual bench,
On the outskirts of town, cold in it’s isolation.

The bottle in his ragged pocket is half empty
And isn’t long for this world.

Through permanent tears, his red eyes stare
Out at a grey world.

He is not old, of course,
But his energy is gone, drained by sadness,
His spirit has left him, now a captive of solitude.

Briefly he remembers another life,
One of bright orange passion, of love even.

Pausing for only a moment’s regret,
He turns back to his bottle,
And to his grey world.

Darkness

I like the theme this goes in but think personally that it is not yet dark enough.Maybe it was just the word grey at the end I would prefer black or perhaps bleak as a colour.

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