Star
As I lay there,
gazing at our favorite star.
I think of you,
and wish you were not so far.
If only it were the miles that kept us apart,
And not the emptiness of our estranged hearts.
But here u are,
deep in sleep, laying next to me..
Oblivious of all the hurt in me
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noname...
This is a really good write... you brought tears to my eyes.
I'm hoping for your sake the message in this poem isnt true for you.
But you did a really nice job writing it.
Linda
Thanks Linda..
Thanks Linda...
Aw...
This was a very sweet poem that made me sad inside. But it was so beatiful. These lines were amazing: If only it were the miles that kept us apart, And not the emptiness of our estranged hearts. Excellent =]
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